Saturday, December 6, 2008

~Note 02~

There I saw her
Holding her hands up, her tiny hands...
Stretching it as far as it can go.....
Reaching out unto the beyonds and yet to reaching none
There I saw her
Staring deep into the stars of night
Though clouds may destroy her view
She'd rather be blind, than to leave this to her so real
There I saw her
Pursuing what she thought everyone saw
She smiled and storms came pouring over
She was cold but held on she did; a fool~
There I saw her
Laughing at her
The thunders roar, the window shattered
The lightning strike and blinded us all
There I saw her
Covered in glass
The beauty she was no more
But an ugly being
Fool she was! Fool I thought!
There I saw her
Dying slowly
My heart ached with laughter
What stupidity!
There I saw her...
There I saw her...
Green with envy....
For I awoke~
Her scars were there
Her hands still the same
But the clouds and pain had gone away
There I saw her
She turned to me
and smiled as her face was filled with joy
She held up the other hand
Her mother calls
And she smiled the more
But never did she leave
Never did she put her hands down
Only awaiting me...
''What have I been doing?''

JTJL

3 comments:

Joyce TJL said...

Understand this anyway u like it..
This can be approached in many ways...
It just came up...
I dunno how..
But I can't even get what the details are...Still, there is sth I know this work of mine tells...

dy said...

aww..so deep..i'm wondering who could touch your life like that..or not..i could hv gotten it wrong..

Joyce TJL said...

Ppl aound me rather~~
But this can mean many things....
It can be put into many ways
All of a sudden I just got an image of a girl by the window~
And I just type....

P/S: It was done late at night, I din add anhthin fancy...